Star Wars- The Battle at Yavin Part 5

For those just joining, this is some fan fiction that I wrote when I was 12 years old. For the full story, and for those brave enough to begin at the beginning, here are the prior parts!

PART 1

PART 2

PART 3

PART 4

CHAPTER 5

 

When they walked into the temple the 5 Jedi trainees were met by the sight of a circle of trainees doing their routine excersizes,

“Mom!” Jacen called,  his voice slicing through the silence.

Every head in the room turned at the sound, including Leia’s who immediately began to walk  regally towards the group at the door,

“What are we supposed to say to her?” Raynar hissed in his ear. Jacen gulped at the thought,

“I guess we should have thought of that before we barged in here.” But it was too late for them to slip out unnoticed, for Leia was already with them,

“You bellowed? ” She said with a small smile, “Well … ” Jaina let the sentence trail off, “We kind of wanted to apologize to you for giving you the cold shoulder back there.” Jaina finish in a rush, and by the look on Leia’s face she knew that they were already forgiven , “Time to get to your excersizes.” She stated. Which meant end of conversation.

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Lando and Han sat, ill at ease, in the cockpit of the Lady Luck. They both had a very bad feeling of dread  even though neither of them were about to admit it,

“So where are we going? ” Han asked , even though he tried to sound happy, the wo ry seeped through,

“Ummm . . . ” Lando intoned with the same worry, “I was thinking the Nyrror system.”

Han nearly fell out of his seat,

“The Nyrror system?!”

The Nyrror system was out in the middle of nowhere… literally, it was at least 50 light years away from any remotely populated  planet.

“and what do you expect to find there?” Han asked suspiciously. He had known Lando since back in their smuggling days so whenever Lando came around for help it always meant one of two things, big trouble, or big business.

Lando held up his hands in surrender , “Hey, you know I’m totally legit now. No more work with the underdogs  It’s been this way ever since the little mishap at Bespin.” Han cringed at the memory of Lando turning him over to the Empire to be frozen in carbonite and shipped off  to the notorious Jabba the Hutt to set a trap for Luke,

“Hey, that was a big mistake on my part, I’ll admit that. But, I think I’ve mad it up to you,” Lando promted with a charming apologetic smile, “Just think of all of the times I’ve saved your sorry behind from the clutches of the Empire.”

Han didn’t answer. He was too busy looking out the viewport at the two huge Super Star Destroyers that were sitting motionless directly in their paths,

“I’d say you’re about to add one more time to that list.” Han replied slowly as the Star Destroyers sighted them and powered up.

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After landing of the closest planet in the system Luke wondered if it had been a good idea . The city around his was in ruins. Building were crumpling with age and from lack of repairs, roofs of some of the houses that looked like, at one time, they may have been nice, were caving in and the paint was chipped and peeling .

The weird thing was Luke could still get the faint feeling of life radiating from the planet.

He looked around trying to pinpoint where the feeling came from and spotted one house that looked more intact than the others and thought maybe someone was still living there. He was wrong.

“Master Skywalker. I’ve been excpecting you.” The voice radiated from the doorway even before he reached the house. The voice sounded young and strong and when Luke reached the door he saw why he thought that . The man was somewhere between young and middle aged and he covered his age well.

“Who are you?” Luke asked . “I figured you may not recognize me, but my name i s Admiral Sonaz Takyeesh.”

“And let me guess , ” Luke asked wearily, “You’re the new warlord for the Empire… or what’s left of it.”

Takyeesh smiled, showing his dazzling white teeth as he stepped further into the light, allowing Luke’s first good look at him. Takyeesh was tall and muscular with broad shoulders and tanned skin. His long dark hair was streaked purple and pulled back at the nape of his neck ,

“Why are you here?” Luke asked, his voice growing harsh.

Takyeesh, still smiling, answred slowly as if savouring each word, “I’m here, because I have something you want.”

Luke glanced around to see if there was something hidden in the runnle of the room they were standing in.

“Oh, you won’t find it here.” Takyeesh replied noticing his quick nervous glances, “No, not here.” He murmured to himself .

“What is it?” Luke asked. He was beginning  to get tired of this game.

There was a long pause as Takyeesh carefully hissed the words, “I have Cray.”

Suddenly Luke’s powers were dosed out and his mind went numb and the last thing that went through his mind was ysalimiri before his mind went blank.

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On Yavin 4 all of the Jedi trainees were in a frenzy as they tried to pull together their skills and get ready for the fight that was predicted to begin. There was an edge in the air as all of the Jedi grew more and more alert to their surrounding.

Jaina, Jacen, Zekk, Raynar, Tenel Ka and Lowie were all training together near the river in the forest outside t he Jedi Academy.

Raynar was standing in an attack stance getting ready to parry against the violet blade of Jaina’s lightsabre when he suddenly flick the switch to his own lightsabre causing the glowing blade to retract and he dropped the casing to the loop on his belt where it usually lay,

“What ‘s wrong?” Jaina asked a worried edge to her voice.

Raynar thought carefully with his brow creased but before he could answer Jaina felt it too. She looked over at her friends to notice that they all had sensed it too. It felt as though there was something wrong. Dead wrong,

“Where did Uncle Luke go?” Jaina demanded wracking her bra.in to remember,

“He never said.” Zekk answered immediately, “But I get why you want to know. I f elt it too.”

“I also felt the disturbance in the force.” Tenel Ka spoke up, “And l’m afraid that Master Luke may he in grave danger if we do not help him.”

“We’ll have to ask mom.” Jacen said, turning to Jaina, “Let’s go.”

But he realized that there wasn’t the time. From above he heard the rumble of engines and he noticed that a shadow had fallen over him and his companions,

“Or maybe we’ll have to just stay here.” He contradicted quietly as he glanced up at the giant Super Star Destroyer that hung motionless over the forest.

“Here are the times that I wish I had trained more.” Jaina said trying to make a joke out of their situation, but the meaning of the joke was lost as the Destroyers opened fire.

 

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  1. Oh, those Destroyers!!! I was just remembering the Millennium Falcon in my basement… I played with it for a year then moved on to something else. I remember selling it in a garage sale, too.

    Good command of your scene movement. 🙂

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    1. Most of them are actually Star Wars Universe characters. Either from the “Young Jedi Knight” series, “Children of the Jedi” or “The Courtship of Princess Leia” all some of my FAVOURITES!! The only one I made up was Takyeesh and some of the systems. Nyrorr was mine…and I think one more place as well.
      Most of them though, we’re also “real” Star Wars Universe places (I.e Coruscant, Yavin, Kashyyk)

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